I am on my own
No hint or guidance awaits
I risk the venture
Hoping that my words
blind and flightless though they be
will still catch the scent
and dare to depart
to the place where faith alone
navigates the breeze
A sudden rush of wind
ripping from gravity's grasp
syllables of love
Jim, you are putting the rest of us to shame!
ReplyDeletePolly is correct, absolutely lovely haikus!
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shakira
Wow, very nice!
ReplyDeleteYou're always so thoughtful in your haiku! Truly great stuff.
be proud of yourself..
ReplyDeletebrilliant Haikus!
Risking the venture...what more can any of us do?
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Oh that is sooo good!
ReplyDeletebeing on your own gives you free rein.. anything goes, no rules to follow, no one to please. lucky you!!! i love your haiku!
ReplyDeleteif you have time, please check out my haiku
hey, this is nicely done, james!
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