Greetings. I will be leaving town tomorrow morning so I thought I would post the Wednesday Haiku this afternoon. I understand the theme is "flame". Here ya go.
I stared into flames
Until I saw nothing but
The cosmos’ first spark
It flared through my soul
Burning all but trace remnants
Of clay and scarred earth
Bits and pieces, shards
Of creation’s first fumbling
Skeletal and dry
Yet deep within the
Cavernous darkness a trace
Of moisture remained
Which defied the flames
And slowly seeped upward towards
Heat’s flickering threat
Defiant and bold
Quenching the thirst of ages
Until it engulfed
The ravenous flame
Now the glowing residue
domesticated
WOW.Very well done, James.
ReplyDeleteI like what you mentioned about soul.
Happy Wednesday!
Mine is here
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shakira
Excellent!! Such imagery! Well done!
ReplyDeleteYou are probably acquainted with the poems of Gerard Manley Hopkins. Your poem reminds me of these line from his poem, "God's Grandeur":
ReplyDeleteThe world is charged with the grandeur of God.
It will flame out, like shining from shook foil...
Blessed words--yours and his!
Imagine the flames!
JAMES the whole collection is magnificent! a ravenous flame tamed by a wee bit of moisture... so profound yet so beautiful. i can see so many subliminal meanings here. i love it!!!
ReplyDeleteYour Inner Flame (Haiku)
Burning Heart (Haiku)